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"No singing, no dancing, no writing or text other than manual instructory, no media, no unauthorised leaflets or newspapers..."

This is the future. The future looks bleak.

Although the world is united as one nation under the Consortium, half of its citizens have disappeared without an explanation. Music, books, art and free speech have all been prohibited under punishment of death. The nation is split into the stupid and the smart. Diet, hobbies and routines are all monitered by the Consortium's secret police; the entire world is ruled by one giant iron fist.

But through this, an underground rebellion of rockers is rising. They want their sounds to be heard again, they want to be able to listen to their i-pods without fear of being 're-educated', they want a paradise of music.

Amos Harvey lee is one of them, and he has to convince adrenalin-junkie Raphael that he's one too...

..and that he can lead the underground rebellion for free music.

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  • NO! NOT AGAIN!

    Um...I sorta...restarted. And stuff.

    But it's okay! I'm keeping most of what's here, just revising it. The opening is going to change, you might wanna read it. I'll tell you the numbers of new chapters. Stuff is in there that is vital...and...stuff.

    Blame NaNoWriMo. I just didn't like the opening. So...Yeah.

    I'm not going to update what I write for NaNo until the end of the month, then there will be weekly updates. Not that anyone cares...But there they'll be.

    I don't know if the novel will be finished in 50, 000 words, I think it probably will be though. I should have 25, 000 words by now.

    I have only 12, 000. That's not good. I'm going to go write my socks off now, because I have scared myself. Have fun, and I should be back with new yummy stuff for you later on.

    Don't expect it to be good though. The stuff I'm writing is pure twoddle, with about a tenth of the thought put into it that I'd put into a regular chapter. So, yeah, that'smy excuse.

    Later!

    0 Comments 18 days

  • Well Well, A Whole Month Eh?

    So, up and coming is NaNoWriMo, AKA national novel writing month.

    It starts in November and I've signed up. Just guess the lucky novel I'm going to be working on...!
    (Oh dear, for those of you who couldn't, it's THIS ONE)

    SO prepare for the novel to actually be updated. I know, I know! What? The sky is falling? Pigs can fly? Lui is UPDATING? It's a strange world, but that's life.

    So, hopefully I'll hear from you soon, and I'll try to contact the fans and let you know about updates. Thanks for reading, you're a fantastic person for giving up your time.

    Yours,

    Lui.

    0 Comments 39 days

  • EDITS!

    I just went through everything and edited some of the worst bits. You know, some errors, the hair fiasco. LOL.

    Um, yah. Sorry if you thought something interesting was actually going on!

    0 Comments 442 days

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Your Book.

Wow.

I hope there's more.
by Stebz'Spy 2 weeks ago
waow!!!!

heya!!!
wow dat was really cool!! ORIGINAL!!! ya dont c stories lik dat every day!!

i really enjoyed it i tot it was real creative , original, an i love da whole music bohiemian ting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! real fab!!!!




ray!!!:D
by That Raychel Kid 50 weeks ago
SWEET

its totally awesome
by Eisley 57 weeks ago
i love it

its 01:15 nd ive been reading for the last half hour i have to go to bed now but i dnt want to. its really good like really really. nice one.
by Poetic Amunition 70 weeks ago
Congratulations!

Hello my dear buddy Louie
I have read the first part, and I truly thought it was genius. For a start, the plot is unique. I doubt this has been done on any similar level before. I love how the idea of the re-educating camps have made an impression, reminds me of History lessons all too much! The way in which you've written this really reflects your ability as a writer as well as a daydreamer, lol. Well done on making such a remarkable story.
x
by Tiina. Ox 75 weeks ago

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  • Stebz'Spy luv Stebz'Spy

    Oh wow, I've just read the blurb and already I love your book
    -D [<-----Cyclops]

    It's an awesome idea.

    2 weeks ago
  • Tamsin Balcanquall Tamsin Balcanquall

    please could you take a look at http://www.bebo.com/aroomwithnoview for me it would mean a lot...thnx

    47 weeks ago
  • Emma Emma

    right finally i have found ur bloody book i shall read it vry soon :D

    57 weeks ago
  • Lui K-C luv Lui K-C

    Saaa, not enough people read original fiction on the net. And an author visited my school today! But the bastards only got her in for the year sevens, like they're really intereste at all.

    Hmph.

    Damnit.

    62 weeks ago
  • Craig Chmarny

    New Chapter Is Awesome :D

    Keep The Good Work Up =]

    xxxx

    63 weeks ago
  • Lui K-C luv Lui K-C

    To Tanyo: FLAMER! :P

    To Kisa: Thank you very much! I've recently checked through to find mistakes and add things here and there, but haven't posted it. Your comment about grammar etc gave me a kick up the behind. ^^

    To Lauren: Thank you too! Your comment was really very helpful. (I read through and OMG you're right. Hair this, hair that..Anyone would think my characters were all giant walking furrballs! lol)
    And I will read it aloud to yourself. in a writing book I had given to me it says exactly the same thing; good advice you're giving. ^^

    To Tina and Jay: Thanks sooooo much for reading! At least someone I know bloody is. XD

    And to everyone reading and not commenting, thanks for checking out Drumming in the underground! Have a nice day.

    65 weeks ago
  • Tamsin Balcanquall Tamsin Balcanquall

    pretty good

    kissesx

    66 weeks ago
  • Kisa Kisa

    As a humble fan, I order you to write more. ^^
    The characters are stark and believable, but at the same time every one of them contrasts the others very well: you've got an amazing eye for character development, and I applaud you for it. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there and some sentences could have been written better, but the overall story has an amazing amount of potential. I can't wait to see what you do with the plot, and look forward to seeing more. Kudos.

    :D

    72 weeks ago
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